高分英文作文:如何解決年輕人心理困擾

2024年2月8日發(作者：展館展廳設計方案)

高分英文作文：如何解決年輕人心理困擾

寫作題目：In some countries, young people are not only richer but also safer and

healthier than ever before. However, they are less happy. What are the main caus

of this phenomenon? Give some suggestions to them.

寫作題目講解：

此類雅思寫作題目是典型report類文章的寫法，建議四段寫作模式，namely，Paragraph One: Introduction; Paragraph Two: Reason 1+ Reason 2 + Reason

3…;Paragraph Three: Solution 1 +Solution 2 + Solution3…;Paragraph Four:

Conclusion。

寫作范文：

Children will be happy when their family environment is not confusing, and you may

as well be sure that their happiness does not simply rely on being richer, safer and

healthier. In some countries, children being spoiled one way or another do not

appear to be as happy as they are thought to be, due mainly to their parents' wrong

attitudes concerning respect and discipline. It is possible that you could make your

child happier if you could remember to act like an adult and not a child, and also as a

boss and not as a friend that you intend to be.

當孩子們的家庭環境不混亂時，孩子們會很高興，你也可以肯定他們的幸福不僅是依賴更富裕、更安全和更健康。在一些國家，孩子被寵壞的方式似乎不像他們想象的那么幸福，主要是因為父母對尊重和紀律的錯誤態度。你可能會讓你的孩子更快樂，如果你能記住像成年人而不是孩子那樣表現，也可以作為一個老板而不是朋友。

Likewi, a child is not happy if discipline is missing at home. You ought to act like a

boss and tell your children when they do wrong and correct them, and even punish

them if necessary, becau this could help make a child happier at heart. It may be

said that a happy child is one who is taught to distinguish what is the right thing to

do and what is not. In other words, young children in particular need parents to have

authority to run the family government properly, otherwi the situation might turn

out to be confusing sometimes. The days, there are cas in which children em

to be in charge, as this can be en in the way parents obey their children. Also, it is

not uncommon nowadays that the parent-child relationship is apparently bad on

peer friendship rather than family discipline, thus allowing a child to feel like an

"unhappy" commander-in-chief in the family.

同樣，如果家里缺少紀律，孩子也不高興。你應該表現得像個老板，告訴你的孩子什么時候做錯了，糾正他們，如果必要的話，甚至懲罰他們，因為這樣可以讓孩子心里更快樂。可以說，一個快樂的孩子是被教導去分辨什么是正確的事情，什么是不正確的。換言之，幼兒特別需要父母有權力管理好家庭政府，否則情況有時會令人困惑。現在，有些情況下，孩子似乎是負責的，因為這可以從父母服從孩子的方式看出。而且，現在親子關系顯然建立在同伴友誼的基礎上而不是建立在家庭紀律之上，這并非不尋常，因此讓孩子感覺自己是家中的“不幸福”統帥。

As an adult and boss, both parents are suppod to understand that their children

could be even happier if they are asked to follow the rules regarding respect and

discipline. Of cour, money, safety and health are always important to childhood

happiness; nevertheless, a child should be treated strictly as a child without causing

any confusion. For that matter, you cannot expect a very confud child to be very

happy, can you?

作為成年人和老板，父母都應該明白，如果要求孩子遵守有關尊重和紀律的規則，他們的孩子會更幸福。當然，金錢、安全和健康對童年的幸福總是很重要的，然

而，孩子應該被嚴格地當作孩子對待，而不會造成任何混亂。對于這件事，你不能期望一個非常困惑的孩子會很快樂，對吧?