內蒙古-呼倫貝爾草原英文導游詞_大學英語作文

內蒙古-呼倫貝爾草原英文導游詞_大學英語作文

Lady and Genlenmen:

Welcome to HunLunbeier Grassland! First of all, I’d like to tell you why People call this

bdautiful grassland Hulunbeier grassland. There is a moving legend behind it. A long, long time

ago there lived a couple of lovers on the grassland. The girl was a Hu lun. The boy was Bei Er.

One day a demon chief called Mang Gusi abducted HuLun and dried up the grassland. The grass

withered and yellowed and domestic animals died one after order to save the grassland

and Hu Lun, BeiEr traved a great distance on foot, chasing after Mang Gasi day and night. Finally,

he fainted from exhaustion. In his weakened state, he dreamt that the demon chief had magically

turned Hu Lu,Bei Er traveled a great distance on foot, chasing after Mang Gasi day and night.

Finally, he fainted from his weakened state, he dreamt that the demon chief had

magically turned Hu Lun into a flower which was and suffering from the windy dream in front of

him. He immediately watered the flower and broke the spell. Hu Lun changed back into her

former lf. But the demon chief would not give up. He immediately watered the flower and broke

the spell. Hu Lun changed back in to her former lf. But the demon chief would not give up. He

ized Hu Lun and took her away again. Hu Lun racked her brain for a way to escape. She

succeeded in getting hold of the magic pearl on the demon chief`s head. On swallowing the pearl

Hu Lun turned into a lake. In the meantime BeiEr had killed all of the other demons, but failed to

find Hu Lun. Heartbroken, Bei Er jumped in to a lake to kill of a sudden the earth split

open and formed two lakes, Hu Lun lake and Bei Er Lake, with the Wilson River cloly

connecting them. Later,people living on the grassland named the land hulunbeier Grassland in

momory of them.

HuLunbeier covers an area of 250.557 square kilometers,with a totel population of 2.66

million. The Mongolian natiality is the dominant ethic group, and

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My elder brother has helped me register and get everything into my dormitory. It is time for him

to leave. Due to two days’ toil and lack of sleep he looked a bit worn. His hair was in a mess; his

eyes were slightly swollen. He took out all his money and presd it into my handbag, except 200

hundred yuan his returning fare.

“I have enough money for this mester. I don’t need it,”said I.

“The living cost in Shanghai is so high. It will come in very handy. Besides, it’s cold and

damp in winter here, so you’d better buy a warm and thick coat,” he said in a hoar voice.

I nodded, tears welling into my eyes.

With a smile, he encouragingly patted me on the shoulder and said; “Don’t cry, enjoy your

campus life but don’t forget to work hard.”

簡 評

何樣菊同學的這篇作文雖然不長，但情真意切。字里行間洋溢著兄妹之間的深情厚誼。

對于記敘哥哥送她上大學這段經歷時，作者只截取了最后分別的一段，因而顯得重點突出。

作者沒有用煽情的詞句和動人的語言，但通過對人物的細節描寫，如外貌、表情等，就很好

地渲染出了兄長對妹妹的無私關懷。

作者的語言地道，用詞精煉生動，顯示了作者不凡的語言功底。作者對文體知識也有較

好的了解，在交談中使用了一些口語中的詞匯和詞組，顯得人物對話更加親切生動，真實可

信。

作者在這篇短文中不僅融入了自己的真情實感，而且運用了靈活的寫作技巧，使文章顯

得光彩奪目，是一篇不可多得的佳作。

(點評教師：孫東云)

My College---My New Life

New life begins! I’ve been expecting this moment for a long y,I become a college

student .

All good things must come to an end ! I am now apart from my family members and many good

friends.I am awared that I will have to do everything on my own .

Being responsible is the exact thing that I am suppod to think about! I’m now dealing

something responsibly with my new rommates.I enjoy being together with them,they just like my

good friends in high school,being kind and thoughtful !

My college is a place for a new beginning ,I’m sure I’m taking a new life ,everything here is full

of challenge,quite different from things in high school,teachers are not going to tell you exactly

what you are going to do ,you will have to make your own decisions.

So far,I’m geting along so well with people aroud me ,college provides me with chances and

challenge,I’m going to make a difference to my life!And I have every confidence on mylf.I will

still have to

解釋：

我的大學----我的新生

新的生命開始了！ 我期待這一刻很久了。終于，我成為大學生了。

天下沒有不散的宴席！我與我的家人和許多好朋友分開了！我意識到我做一切事情都要靠

自己了！

有責任感，這是我首先要考慮的！ 我現在能夠帶著一種責任感與我的新室友一起處理一

些事情，我很享

受跟他們在一起的時光，他們就想我高中的朋友，一樣的友好，體貼！

大學是一個重新開始的地方，我確信我已經在過我的新活，這里的一切是那么的有挑戰性，

不像高中的時候，

大學老師是不會什么事都告訴你，你該做什么，要怎么做。你必須自己做決定。

目前，我和身邊的人都相處得很好，大學給我提供了很多機會，也同時給我帶來挑戰，我

將使我的人生變得不同，我對自己有100%的信心。我還將繼續向前走......

Now our college students will meet more and more stress most of which come from taking

examinations and eking a job .

With the development of social economic , the requirements of society to college students has

become more and more large which give us only one way that to work hard to get success and

leave us endless pressure. We would learn more knowledge to get good achievements from

examinations for it was the only way to lect talents for company at the moment .

However , we also have our own ways to reduce our stress that we can take physical exercis ,

listen to music , read humorous stori and so on in our free time for we all know that outleting

our pressure is also very important to us that not only for our health but also prospects of us .