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一．關于友誼關愛和幸福的話題：

riendalwaysgivesyouahelpinghandwhenyou‘reintrouble.

sanoldsaying,”FriendsareGod’swayoftakingcareofus.”

nttheedandtakecareofitto

makeitgrow.

isalwaysreadytogiveeverytingshehastoherchildren,nottoreceive.

uhurrytoleavehomeforschoolwithlittlebreakfast,shealwaysfeels

worriedaboutyouathome.

’llethebrightestsmileonherface.

inion,lovecanshortenthedistancebetweenpeople.

dinneedisafriendindeed.

riendistheonewhoholdsyourhandandtouchesyourheart.

evalueoflifeisnotinwhatwegetbutinwhatweguve.

ly,suchstorieshappenedalmosteverydayandIfeltanof

thisisthetruevalueofbeingavolunteer.

nalwaystrieshertoteachuswellandregardsusasherownbrothersand

sisters.

’safeelingofyourheart.

htIwouldneverforgetthehappymemoriesofmychildhood.

ethestarsinthesky,

lovedbymillionsofpeopletoday,maybeforgottentomorrow.

ly,ofmy

worldalsobecomesbright

二．關于英語學習和努力奮斗的話題：

nowIt’snoucryingoverspiltmilk.

gintheworldisimpossibleifyouputyourheartintoit.

owhoarenotafraidoffailurehavethepossibilitytoreachthepeakof

success.

umeetwithproblems,youcansayloudlyyouareveryhappy,becau

youhavemorechancestochallengeyourlf.

ayinggoes,alsoopens.

akeeverychanceyouget,youcanbeahappyandluckyperson.

inggoes,oneisnevertoooldtolearn.

hisabridgetotheworld.

ldhaveastrongdesireforknowledgeandformagoodstudyhabit.

meisneverfoundagain.

hereisawill,thereisaway.

tudyhabitisthekeytothesuccess.

sbetterthansaying.

notturnthewheeloftimebackwards.

hsbestwholaughslast.

makethebestuofeveryminutetobethemastersoftime.

sohappythatwehardlynoticedthetimepass.

eginningishalfdone.

erknowwhatyoucandountilyoutry.

eisthemotherofsuccess.

earlytohaveenoughtimetopreparefoumyentranceexamination.

possibletoimproveourEnglishwithoutenoughpractice.

nsofShanghaicitizensarelearningtospeakEnglishforthe2010world

Expo.

onlyoneandahalfmonthstoprepareforthefinalexams,soweshould

makefulluofthetime.

hardlybelievethatIhadwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishcontest.

othingsbyhalves.

erhowtiredorillhefelt,healwayshadawarmsmileforhiscustomers.

portesthatmoreandmrepeopleinShanghaiareabletotalkandwritein

Englishthedays.

ndsalotofmoneybuyingbooksthoughheisnotrichenough.

dayisahistory,Tomorrowismystery,Buttodayisagift.

erIamaskedwhatI’dliketodoinmysparetime,I”llnothesitatea

momenttosaythatIlovereadingbooks.

三．關于運動和健康等話題

analsoletbrainshavearestsothatourstudy’llbemoreeffective.

’smore,ahealthybodycanhelpusstudybetterandliveahappierlife.

tshaverealizedthatsportsareespeciallynecessarytoapersonwhowoeks

withhisbrainmsstoftheday.

istssaidthatthebestwaytokeephealthyistolivearegularlife.

mile,perhapsyouwillfindthatallthotroublesomethingswillcometo

anend..

rtokeephealthy,youshouldeatlessfastfood,morefreshvegetablesand

takeenoughexerci.

nitistojumpintothewaterinhotsummer!

四．關于上海—城市方面的話題。

ladtoethatShanghaiosdevelopingmorequicklytheyearsthanever

before.

oplearegettingtoknowtheimportanceofenvironmentprotection.

itisapleasuretodosomethingformyhometown.

thepeople’slivingconditionsbetter,Shanghaigovernmentwillbuilda

circleofforestsaroundthecity.

adandangrytohearhearthatthebadmilkpowdercaudthedeathsof

manybabies.

作文：

Plan:

Inshort，Iwanttodosomeinterestingthingsinthesummerthingsinthesummer

erIdo，thegoalisthesame：togetnecessaryexperienceandbecome

thesix-weekvacationwillpassawayquickly,itwillhavea

greateffectonmyfuturelife.

Mysummerplan

akeagoodrestwhenIget

indagoodbadmintoncoachtohelpme

lltrytoeallmychildrenhoodfriendsandpayavisitto

myhighschoolteacher,st,Iwill

ow,Ikeepthinkingallthefun

thingsthatIwouldliketodoinsummerchattingonline,dancing,goingtothe

beach,clothesshopping,readingoneortwonicebooks,eingsomenicemoivesand

an

,I

justcantwaitforit!

Thesummerholidaysplan

rtoimprovemylfaswellastoenjoy

ahappyholiday,y,uysome

booksandtrymybesttofinishreadingthem.

Secondly,sinceitisaholiday,otosome

Iwillhaveawonderfulsummerholidays!

Mydream

Mydreamistobeanenglishteacher,Asweallknow,englishiswidelyudinthe

t

rtobeanenglish

teacher,eIpractice,the

vemydreamwillcometruesomeday.

Scienceandthchnology:

computers

everycoinhastwo

sides,computershaveadvantagesanddisadvantages.

First,ly。

everyconvenientto

peoplewhoareveryconvenienttopeoplewhoarebusywiththeirjobs,andhave

broughtaboutmanygreatchangesinourlives.

Ontheotherhand,manychildrenbecomesointerestedincomputergamesthat

rdisadvantageisthat

computersareharmfultopeopleyes,especiallytochildrens.

Ithinkthatifwecanovercometheirbadeffevts,wecanbringthemintofull

play.

Robots

Infilms,wecanerobotsandtherobotsusuallywalkandtalk,butintherealworld

botsdonothaveabodywitharms,legs,angaface.

Theydon'r,someofthemcanunderstandpeoples

terprogramtellsthe

robotwhattodo.

Robotsworkquicklyandnevergettired，sotheycanhelppeopleinmanyways。

Theycanheippeopleinmanyways。Theyareveryufulinourlife。

Science

arealwayslookingforthe

truthtothecretsoftheworld。Sciencechangesourlifegreatly。Forexample，Edison

inventedthelight，andourlifebecamemoreconvenient。Welovesciencebecauwe

wanttodiscovermoreabouttheworldandmakeabetterlife。Nowweshouldkeep

oureyesandearsopentolearnmoreaboutscience。Asstudents，weshouldtryhard

tolearnmoreaboutscience。

Sports

A.

Sportsdousgoodinmanyways.

Firstly,takingexerciscankeepusstrongandfit,whichcankeepusfrommanydias.

Secondly,inteamsportslikebasketball,volleyball,orfootball,wewilllearntheimportanceof

akingpartinsportsgames,wewilltryourbesttowinaswellashaveabetter

’smore,Sportscanalsohelpusrelaxafteraperiodoftiring

lfeelfreshaftertakingsomeexerci,andthenyou’llhaveaquickermindanddo

everythingbetter.

’stakeanactivepartinsports.

B.

inkreadingbooksisthebest

fall,itis

’smore,readingbooksmakesyouaknowledgeablepersonandmakesyourlife

gisthebestwaytoenrichyourknowledgeandbroadenyourmind.

erwhattimeyourealizetheimportanceofreadingbooks,

oks,fortheyareyourbestfriends.

C.

Myfavoritemovie

I’mabigfilmfanandmyfavoritemovieisHarryPotter.

Firstofall,Ilovethestory/’sabouthowabraveboywithmagicpowersfights

’ly,Iamfond

t

importantly,lesmetothinkmoreaboutthemeaningof

shIcouldbeagreatkidlikeHarryPotter!

Surroundingsandneighborhood(Schoollife)

A.

Ourschoollife

remanyhobbygroupsinourschool,such

assinginggroup,ng,we

’sinterestingandeveryonelikesitvery

mn,meswehave

olorfulschoollifewehave!

B.

Environmentaroundus

arepollutingtheland,thewaterand

airwe

lknow,we

keepitcleanforourlvesaswellasforourchildrenand

savetheearth.

C.

TheneighborhoodIlivein

hinginourneighborhoodismodernandattractive.

Therearetenhighris/tofeach

highri,eryoungorold,childrenoradults,canhavea

ttoourneighborhood,’squiteconvenientforus

etoourneighborhood!

Travelandtransport

remanyconvenienttransporttoolsaroundus,like

bus,bicycles,moderncities,therearealsoundergroundrailway

e,Inormallytravelbypublictransportbecauitis

thereasons,travelandtransportareimportantinourdailylife.

Travelandtransport

Nowadays,

Shanghai,especiallyinthemorning,alotofroadsarecrowdedwithcars,

ordertoimprovethetrafficandwelcometoShanghaiExpo,thegovernmenthasdecidedtobuild

after2010,we

willbegladtoehoweasilywecantraveltoeverywhereinShanghai.

Travelandtransport

Nowadays,remoreandmoretransportsuchastrain,

ople

liketogotravelonfoot,ent,moreandmore

bicycles

somanytransporttoolsbutwhichonedo

youlikebest?

Travelandtransport

Nowadays,ntakedifferentkindsof

otravellingbytrain,itwon’tcostyoutoomuchmoneyandyou

therexample,ifyoudon’thaveenoughtime,you

ykindoftransporthasitsown

’sveryconvenientforyoutogotravellingwiththehelpofthemoderntransports.I

thinkagoodsystemoftransportmaymakeourlifemoreconvenientandwonderful.