申請書(Application)寫作范圍很廣,實用性很強。在西方,許多人求職就業、求學深造都必須先寫申請書。寫申請書被視為展示自已的觀點、抱負、能力、熱情、特長及知識的機會.所以申請書寫得都很嚴肅認真,力求引起對方的重視,以便獲得就業或人學的機會。
申請書一般包括年齡、性別、自己的工作能力、受過何種訓練和教育,有哪些資歷、成就、希望和抱負等內容。申請書的寫作既要簡明有趣、不落俗套,又要防止寫得古怪異常、嘩眾取寵。千萬不要把求職申請建立在別人同情自己的基礎上,比如說,母親生病需要花錢而急需找到一份工作等。申請應建立在自己能力的基礎上,建立在你希望有所成就和作為的基礎上。不要擔心自己的閱歷不豐富,沒有獲過獎勵等。實際上,在學校參加過的各種活動都可以算作經歷,例如,參加過業余演出和辯論會,榮獲過某種獎勵,當過學生干部等,這些都可以寫出來,讓對方加深對你的了解。
寫一封質量上乘的申請書,是獲得就業或入學機會的第一步,也是至關重要的一步。
(1)寫作注意事項及要求
①客觀陳述事實經歷,用語客觀樸實,行文沉著老練,多使用 might be,would like to,wish,it seems to me that,although , should like to feel, provided ,if等表示委婉客氣、有商量余地的“緩沖”詞匯。與訓練和受教育有關的事實經過可以客觀地陳述出來,避免表達主觀見解,讓人看后自己去下結論。
②不要過分渲染自我。你當然認為自己有能力,夠資格才申請某一職位,但申請書中切忌過分夸大自己的能力或表現出過分的自信,尤其不要說出與事實不符的能力或特長來。
③英文申請書最好使用品質優良的白色信紙和信封。申請者常常需要親筆謄寫,字體要寫得清晰可辨,龍飛鳳舞的字跡無疑是自尋絕路。當然,最好用電腦打出,不僅顯得莊重有禮而且也比較具有現代氣息。
(2)求職最佳活用句式:
① With reference to your advertisement in china News of May 2 for a clerk, I offer myself for the post.
②Please consider me an applicant for the position which you advertised in China Times of December 5
③ In answer to your advertisement in today's the United Daily News for a secretary,I wish to render myservices
④Your advertisement for a telephone operator in the Times of March 8 has interested me. I feel I can fill that position
⑤I am twenty years of age,and am anxious to settle down to office
work
⑤At school I won a scholarship and the first prize in speech con test
⑦ Mv reason for leaving my present employer is that I am desirous of getting broader experience in trading
⑧ My reason for leaving my present employment is simple because I see no chance of advancement
⑨ As regards salary,I leave it to you to decide after experience of my capacity.
⑩1 am willing to serve on trial for some months at a small salary
(3)求學最佳活用句式
①Could you send me more information on your department and an application form for admission?
② I have read the announcement of the scholarship in.. .that your
University is offering,and I would like to submit m' application
③ I would be most grateful if you would send me details of graduate
.study facilities or scholarship in......which..... University may be offering to students from overseas
④I have taken all the three tests which meet your requirement
⑤ I have just left school,but have a good knowledge of English
⑥I am a good accountant and have a thorough knowledge of the English language,
⑦I am a graduate of... Commercial School,and have recently completed the business course at the.. . University of Commerce
⑧ Enclosed you will find a letter of recommendation from my former teacher of English.
⑨I would appreciate it if you would forward the application materials at your earliest convenience
⑩ Thank you very much for your kind consideration
范文研讀
假定你叫劉華,結業于兩年制的北京高級商業專科學校,想申請到美國讀大學本科,申請書中包括以下要點:
(1)申請攻讀會計專業本科;
(2)申請入學時間及TOEFL考試成績:
(3)本人的工作經歷及足夠經濟來源;
(4)請對方考慮申請,盡快呈寄表格。
(詞數120左右)
參考詞匯:
大學本科:Undergraduate program
會計專業:accounting
北京高級商業?茖W校:
Business Administration at Beijing Junior College of Commerce. 申請讀大學本科:
apply for admission to an IJndergraduate program
這是一份申請自費攻讀會計專業本科約入學申請書。一般來說,第一封信不必太長,只需寫明自己的姓名、職業、學歷、專業、通訊地址、擬學專業和人學時間就可以了。申請自費留學的兩個基本條件一是具有足夠的經濟來源;二是具有適當程度的外語水平。凡具備這兩個條件者,通常不受學歷、年齡和工作年限的約束,均可申請自費到國外就讀語言學校、專科、本科、研究生及進修。
Dear Sir,
I wish to obtain admission to your undergraduate program in Accounting .My intended date of entrance is Fall ,2002 or Spring ,2003.
After I successfully completed my study of Business Administration at Beijing Junior College of Commerce in June,2000,I have been working with a business firm as an assistant in the accounting department .Thus,l have chosen Accounting as my prospective major.
Early this year, I took the TOEFL and achieved a score of 590,chic Ii I believe will meet your requirement. In addition,I have sufficient financial resources to provide for my own education
I would greatly appreciate it if you would mail the necessary application matenaIs to me as early as possible
Sincerely yours
Lin Hua
這份申請書開門見山說明了申請人學的意圖,并提出了人學時間的請求。言簡意賅,一目了然第二段從介紹個人從事的專業,自然過渡到求學深造的理由,專業對口,符合要求。接下來把 “托福”成績與經濟來源作了必要的補充,為早日獲得校方呈寄申請表打下了很關鍵的基礎。
假定你是中國留美學生Lisa.為申請在暑假做漢語教師寫一汾求職申請書,申請書包括以下要點:
(1)英漢語言的水平及從事漢語教學的經驗。
(2)性格幽默,有親和力,善于與人相處。
(3)隨信寄去1個貼好郵票的,寫有收信人性名地址的信封。
(詞數120左右)
【題析】
這是一份求職申請信。中國留學生申請做漢語教師條件當然得天獨厚,如果信中強調自己的英漢水平和從事對外漢語教學的經驗,再加上作為教師的優良個人素質,競爭力就會更強了。在求職申請信中也可以附上通訊聯系方式,因為這樣更說明了你的求職是積極主動又充滿自信的.
【范文】
Dear Sir,
I would like to apply for the post of Chinese teacher in your summer program advertised in yesterday's newspaper
I am a native of Beijing and can speak standard mandarin. And I
have been in the United States for more than two years,so I am bilingual
in Chinese and English,and I also know a little French. I have had some
experiences in theching chinese since i came here.
i have a good sense of humour,the ability to draw people out and can easily get along with almost everyone.
if you feel that my qualifications meet with your requirements,i would be pleased to come for an interview,i have enclosed a stamped,addressed envelope for your reply.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Lisa