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英語作?范?

2016年專接本英語寫作優秀范?

1.《最近流?的?絡交流?具的利與弊》

WhatabouttheInternetcommunication

Afterenteringthe21stcentury,laysanimportantrole

inktheInternetcanbringusbothadvantagesanddisadvantages,weshouldbecarefulwhenarechatting

throughInternet.

Firstofall,mple,eisn't

Internet,theywouldspendmanytimesinwaitingforaletter,buttheInternetcanhelpustocommunicateatanytimeand

inatesthebarrierofdistance,anditisveryconvenienceforus.

Thecond,eoplemayspendhourschattingwithfriendsthroughtheInternet,but

oplesaythattheyaremoreandmoreindifferenttoeachotherinreallife.

SoInternetchattingisadouble-edgedsword,hould

correctlymakeuoftheInternet.

GroupPurchasing

2.1.現在團購很流?

2.團購有很多好處，但也有不少問題

3.我的建議

Inrecentyears,anewtypeofonlineshoppingisrapidlygainingpopularity—grouppurchasing,whichwasoriginally

icanbuynotonlygoods,butalsoall

urchasingisveryconvenient,

rouppurchasingisnothingmorethananotherformofonlineshopping,thenatureofitisno

msthatexistinonlineshoppingalsocanbefoundingrouppurchasing,

likedeceptiveadvertimentsorpoorafter-salervices.

Inmyopinion,becarefulnottobuy

somethingwedon’tneedonlytofollowthefashion

Aclassmateofyourswhohasinfluencedyoumostincollege

Roismyroommate,always

findanicesmileonherface,endshipattributestohergreat

influenceonme.

Intermsofstudy,sheisgoodatEnglish,mconfudaboutteacher’xplanation

oftexts,s,shealsoimpartsmeafew

languagelearningtipsandrecommendationswhicharoumylearninginterest.

Inaddition,intheleisuretime,eIamnotthelocalstudentandmyhometownisfaraway

fromhere,r,ompanygivesmegreatcomfort.

IfeelsoluckythatIcouldhavesuchagoodfriend,whoteachesmeandhelpmeinmystudyandleisurelife,sosheisthe

classmatethathasinfluencedmemostincollege.

Themostimpressingcourinmycollegelife

3.范?thecourwhichimpressmethemost

Whentalkingaboutthecourwhichimpressmethemost,

studentofscience,Iamalwaysfascinatedwiththemagicintesttubes,andfromthiscourIgainedmorethanpure

knowledge.

Tobeginwith,erimentshelpedustestifyand

s,bydesigningexperimentalproceduresofown,webecamemore

flexibleandinnovative.

Moreover,Iample,tobefocudandcareful

whenproceedingatask,tobepatientandcalmwhenfacingfailures,andtocommunicateproperlywhenyouneedsomeone

anbeveryvaluableaststoyourlife.

BasicChemicalExperimentinfluencedmenotonlyonacademicfieldbutalsoondailyaffairs,thereforeit’sthemost

impressingcourtome.

4.使你受益最深的校園活動

Universityisaplacethwoyears,Ihave

tbenefitedonepoppingintomymindisthe

sportsmeetinglastmonth.

Firstofall,sportsmeetingoffersagreatopportunitytodrawstudents’

students,r,doingsportscouldbeenasarelaxingingredient

intediousstudylife.

Secondly,asamemberoffootballclub,the

game,weencouragedeachotherwhenwefeltfrustrated;taught

metobemoreandmoreteam-oriented.

Lastly,singlydentarylifestylecauslazinessandpossibilityofobesity.

Therefore,thissportsmeetingoncampusmobilizedourstudentstoenjoythefunofsports.

Thisisthecampusactivitythathasbenefitednotonlymebutalsomostofthestudents

town

Ifaforeignfriendofmineisgoingtovisitmyhometown,Shanghai,IwouldliketotakehertoYuGarden.

YuGardenisatraditionalChiewill

walkonthecrookedbridgeandtakephotosofthe

s,shecantastethelocalcuisineslikesteamedbuns,wontonnoodles,reavariety

romthebeautifulsceneryanddeliciousfood,shewillalsobeattractedbythe

mple,shewilleShanghai-stylepaper-cutting,andtheprocessof

makingChinecandyandclayfigurines.

aplacewherethefeaturesofthiscityarecombined.

eaforeignfriendofyoursiscomingtoChina,whatisthemostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotakehim/herto

eandwhy?

Beijing—MustFirstSeePlaceinChina

IfoneofmyforeignfriendsiscomingtoChina,nodoubt,sonsareasfollowing:

First,BeijingisthecapitalofChina,gisasuperlargedistributioncenter,high-

qualitygoodsacrossthecountrywillappearhere,,thereareagreatnumber

oftouristattractionsandhistoricsitesinBeijing,suchasForbiddenCity,

more,someoftheinterestingplacesarewithinwalkingdistance,soyoucanvisitveralscenicspotsbyspendinga

,takebusorsubwaytrainto

anywhereyouwanttogo.

Directions:Forthispart,uldwriteat

least120wordsbutnomorethan180words.

themostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotake

him/hertoeandwhy?

【參考范?】

StudentPavilion

WhenIamsuppodtointroduceoneplaceinmycampusformyforeignfriend,thefirstplacetocomeuptoourmind

automaticallyisthestudentpavilion.

ThereasonwhyIaminfavorofitisthatstudentpavilionplaysapositiveroleinimprovingstudents’heir

heavyschedules,studentsarplace

whichholdsavarietyofactivitiesfromtimetotimerangefromacademictorecreational,suchasacademicreports,speech

contests,painting’sclubs,activitiesprovideopportunitiesforstudentstoenrichtheirknowledgeandrelax

themlves.

Allinall,steifyoucometothestudent

pavilion,you’llbeboundtoloveit.

SuppoaforeignfriendofyoursiscomingtovisityourChina,whatisthemostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotake

him/hertoeandwhy?

8.假設你的?位外國朋友來參觀中國，你最感興趣的地?想帶他/她去看?為什么?

Guilin–ABeautifulCityinChina

InChina,there’sasayingthat"ThelandscapeofGuilintopsthatofanyotherplaceunderheaven."Inlightofthis,Iwill

recommendGuilinasthefirstdestinationofmyforeignfriend’striptoChina.

OverlookingtheLiJiangRiver,ewasderivedfromthecassiatreesof

eslinethestreetsofthetownwithyellowflowersblossomingeverySeptember,fillingtheairwithsweet

scent.

cienttimes,ures

beautifulmountains,clearrivers,grotesquerocksandmysticcrags,gonabambooraft

driftingdowntheriver,llfeelasiftheywere

inascrollofChinelandscapepainting.

IbelievethatmyforeignfriendwillmarvelattheunparalleledbeautyofGuilin.

Suppoaforeignfriendofyoursiscomingtovisityourhometown,whatisthemostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotake

him/hertoeandwhy?

9.假設你的?位外國朋友來參觀你的家鄉，你最感興趣的地?想帶他/她去看?為什么?

―Suppoaforeignfriendofyoursisgoingtovisityourhometown/yourcampus/themostinterestingplace

youwouldliketotakehim/hertoeandwhy?‖

Themostinterestingplace

DearPacival,

IamthrilledtoknowthatyouaregoingtovisitmyhometownandIcan’verythingthathappened

whenIwasin

yourcity,andyourparentsandyouweresokindtomethatIwilltrymybestthistimetomakeyourstayanenjoyableand

memorableone.

Myhometown，Changsha,isthecapitalofHunanprovinceandbestknownasthestarcityforitswelldeveloped

renumerousplacesandattractionsworthrecommending,andYueluMountainis

thefirstonethatI’y,n

exceed,afterahalfhour,wewillreachtheBird

revariousrarebirdsthere,andtheycansing,perform,boutanhour,wewillarrive

atthepeak,nerythereisspectacularandwecanhaveawonderfulpanoramaofthewholecity.

Ibetyoumustbeveryexcitedaboutalltheactivities,needto

doispackupandgo,andIassureyouthatthistripwillbeagreatfun.

Shouldyouhaveanyquestionandsuggestion,plealetmeknow.

Iamlookingforwardtoyourarrival.

Yourssincerely,

Romeo

10.學習?捷徑

Thecomicisanironicdenttriestofindabook

abouthowtodowellinschoolwithoutstudyinginthelibrary,onlytobetoldthatitisunrealisticandimpractical.

Thediscussionofwhetherthereisashortcuttolearningisntiallytherequestingforasupremelearningmethod–a

inion,ecombinationofdiligenceand

asEdisonsays,―Geniusisonepercentinspiration,ninety-ninepercentperspiration.‖

Ononehand,emostresourcefulones

havetodevotetheirtime

studyingandreading,ortswillbefutileifweidleawayour

time.

Ontheotherhand,itisundeniablethattherearewaystoimprovelearningefficiency,especiallywiththesupportof

learnersarealwaystheoneswithclevererlearningskills.

Tosumup,onlywhenwediligentlyandskillfullycanweachieveacademicsuccess.

11.能否?電?字典做閱讀時查單詞

Fromthiscartoon,weclearlyethatthestudentisaskinghisteacheraboutwhetherornothecanusometechsupportto

’sbehindthecartoonisthefactthatnowadaysstudentsbecome

increasinglydependentontechnologicaldevicestohelpthemwiththeirschoolwork.

Inmyopinion,withtheadvancesintechnology,fall,technologyprovidesinfinite

rparentswerestudents,theycouldonlylearnfromtheirteachers,whilenowadays,wecan

,it’mple,Igotenrolledina

equiresisaPCorasmartphone,andIcanlearnthe

,it’sthecours,freeAppsarealsoeasily

accessible.

Asforme,techsupporthasbecomeanimportantpartinmydailystudy.

Iwillcontinuetolearninthisway,andIbelievethatwecanlearnmoreefficientlyifweareabletoutilizethetechnologies

aroundus.

ions:uldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtothe

outlinegivenbelowinChine:

1.?學都?考試來衡量學?的成繢

2.考試可能帶來的副作?

3.我對考試的看法

范?：

MyViewsonExamination

Nowadaystheexaminationisudasachiefmeansofdecidingwhetherastudentsucceedsorfailsinmasteringa

ghitifficient,itssideeffectsarealsoenormous.

Ontheonehand,eachersareoftenjudgedbyexaminationresults,they

htsuccessfullywithintentiontotake

.therhand,th

examinationscoreistheonlycriterionforhisacademicperformancestudentsdriventomemorizemechanicallyratherthanto

thinkcreatively.

Infact,fewofusadmitthatexaminationscancontributeanythingreallyimportanttothestudents’

thatistheca,whycannotwemakeachangeanddevisomethingmoreefficientandreliablethanexaminations?(153

words)

13.1.有?認為?學?應獨??活

2.另?些認為?學?應與別?同住

3.你的看法

LivingaloneorLivingwithRoommates

Nowadays,therehasappearedaheateddiscussionamongthecollegestudentsastowhethertheyshouldlivealone

outsidethecampusorlivetogetherwithotherroommatesinthestudents’nsaredividedoverthematter.

Thowhoareinfavnenjoyabsolute

ealsofreetoequipthe

roomwithapersonalcomputersothattheycanhaveeasyaccesstotheInternet.

veralstudentssharingthesameroom,each

person’ningtotoleratethe

differencesbetweenindividuals,theycanbecomemoremature.

AsfarasI’mconcerned,s,itisalotcheaperto

liveinadormthantorentaapartmentoutsidethecampus

Directions:Youaretowritein100～120wordsaboutthetitle"OnFailure".Youshouldbayourcompositionontheoutline

giveninChinebelow:

14.1．失敗在?活中很常見；

2．?們對待失敗有各種不同的態度；

3．我對待失敗是什么態度。

范?：

OnFailure

n'tworkhardandtryourbest,mes,even

whenwehavealreadyworkedhardandmadegreatefforts,aythateveryonehas

experiencedfailure,,whichisjustin-evitable.

oplehatefailureandloheartwhentheyfail,asifitwerethe

don'tgiveupandlearnsomethingfromthepastfailure,theywillmakeitintheend.

Inmypointofview,failure,justassuccess,uethatweworkhardinordertoachievesuccess,butwe

shouldalsohavethecapacitytolearntolivewithfailures.

theoldsayingruns,"Failureisthemotherofsuccess."

Failurewillleadustosuccessintheend.

Nowadays,eriouslyinfluencedpeople'sdailylife

etheproblem,oplesuggestthatmore

way,thetrafficdensitycanbereducedhencespeedinguptheflowofbusand

newroadsandstreetswillbefilledwithmanycarsandbussoon.

heotherhand,thiswill

affecttheconsumptionandmakebusmorecrowded.

Inmyopinion,hesametime,busshouldhavetheirown

s,undergroundtrainandcitytrainshouldbedeveloped

quickly.(151words)

ctMobilePhoneinLibrary

1現在有不少?在圖書館的閱覽區?使??機

2這?現象可能帶來的影響

3我的看法

【范?】

RestrictMobilePhoneinLibrary

Asthenumberofstudentswhohavemobilephonesincreas,problemswhicharecaudbyitspopularityoncampusalso

heproblemsthathavearoudpeople’sattentionistheuofmobilephoneinlibrary’s

phenomenonbecomessocommonthatyoucanesomeoneusingitwheneveryougotothelibrary.

nehand,studentswhouitcannotconcentrateon

therhand,withtheringingofthephonesand

people’stalking,studentsaroundthemcanbedistractedfromtheirreadingaswell.

Therefore,,uphone’ssilentofvibration

,ifyoudoneedtomakeacallorndmessages,you’dbettergo

outoftheroomoratleasttrytoreducethevolumeofyoursoundandyourphone’ssound.

WeHelpStrangers?

1有?認為幫助陌??是?種美德

2有?卻認為幫助陌??會給??帶來危害

3我認為、、、、、、

【范?】

ShouldWeHelpStrangers?

Helpihelpfromothersthroughout

ourlife,therhand,

greatjoywhenwearetrusted,neededandabletogiveahand.

However,ythathelpingothersinvolvesrisksof

gahandtoastrangeroftenputsusinavulnerablepositionforitmeanstrustingahandtoa

strangeroftenputr,therearetimes

’eblindtothatlimitation,givingahand

wouldconverlytakeourlife.

Inmyopinion,ile,weshouldbewareofgetting

cheatedanducommonntoteling

anythingunusual,weshoulddefendourlvesorturntothepolice.

-carbonLifestyle

1、?前低碳?活成為?種流?

2、低碳?活指的是、、、

3、作為?學?我們該怎么做

【范?】

Low-carbonLifestyle

Everysince,theWorldClimateConferencewasheldinCopenhagen,theterm―low-carbonlifestyle‖hasbecomea

ne,oldoryoung,istakingaboutitandexertinghimlftoachievethelow-carbongoalof

low-carbonlifestyle.

Whatonearthislow-carbonlifestyle?Low-carbonlifestylemeanstolowertheemissionofcarbon,especiallycarbondioxide,

monpeoplelikeus,-

carbonlifestylecallsfortheactiveparticipationofallthepeopleintheprocessofsavingelectricityandgas,aswellas

recyclingtheufulmaterials.

Ascollagestudents,wy,weshouldavoid

ly,takingpublictransportratherthandrivingis

tnotleast,bothweandtheearthwillbenefitenormouslyifweeatgreenfoodinsteadofjunk

food.

WeResumeTheTraditionalChineCharacters?

1.有?提出恢復使?繁體字

2.有?對此反對

3.我的看法

【范?】

ShouldWeResumeTheTraditionalChineCharacters?

WiththeincreasingexchangesbetweenthemainlandandTaiwanorHongKong,aproblemhasattractedpeople′s

attention:differentChinepeople

s,theysay,learningtraditionalcharactershelpspeopleknow

betteraboutourtraditionalculture.

Others,however,y,theyarguethattraditionalChinecharactersaremuchmorecomplicated

ingbackthetraditionalones,ly,

forforeigners,simplifiedcharactersaremucheasiertolearn,whichmayhelppopularizeChineculture.

Personallyspeaking,Idon′viousthatbringing

thembackwillcostalotoftimeandenergy,tion,

foreignexchangewillbeaffectedwithforeignersfrightenedawaybythecomplicatedcharacters.

essionalEthicsofDoctors

1.?前許多醫?的職業道德遭到?們的質疑

2.原因是…

3.你認為應該如何解決這?問題

【范?】

OnprofessionalEthicsofDoctors

ingtoasurveyonprofessionalethicsviolating,

ctorsarereportedtotreatpatientslightlyandtakebribesfrompatientsormedicine

manufacturers.

ostdoctorsarepaid

accordingtothequantitiesratherthanqualitiesofmedicalrvicestheyperform,manyofthemtendtoemorepatientsat

erfactorishowpeopleedoctors’s’performancesconcernpatients’

healthandlife,andmostpatientsortheirfamiliesassumethatdoctorswouldtrytheirbestinthemedicaltreatmentifthey

takebribes,uldwesolvetheproblems?First,Ithinkitisnecessaryto

carryoutreformsintheplayi,weshould

changetheattitudesofbothpatientsanddoctorsandmakeitveryclearthattreatingandsavingpeoplearedoctors’duty

insteadofprivilege.

’tRelyTooMuchonComputers

1.現在許多?越來越依賴電腦

2.過分依賴電腦帶來寫?字等問題

3.我的看法

【范?】

Don’tRelyTooMuchonComputers

Dowerelaytoomuchoncomputers?Yes,everythingwedoandeveryaspectofourlifeisaffectedbymodern

omputersinbusiness,publicrvices,educationandentertainment.

However,hatpeoplearemorelikelytomakespelling

risthatpeoplearesodependentoncomputersthattheyhavelost

―thecomputersaysXYZ‖,anttomakesomeonebelieve

youlikeanidiot,justtellhim―that’swhatthecomputersaid‖.

Inmyopinion,achinesshouldbe

i,chaoscanoccurwhensuddenlyourcomputerscrashorwhat

iswor,refutotakeourorders.

21.如今不少學?在英語學習中不重視拼寫2.出現這種情況的原因

3.為了改變這種狀況，我認為…

DueAttentionShouldBeGivenToSpelling

r,nowadaysmanystudentsdonotpaymuchattentiontoit.

fall,theylikeaneasywayofstudying,whichcaussomeomissions

,theteachersmightnotbeverystrictinstudents’a,teachersemtobe

moreconcernedwithgrammarandvocabularybutnotspelling.

Tochangethissituation,inmyopinion,nd,theteachersshould

givemoreattentiontostudents’spelling,askingthestudentstobeconsciousoftheimportanceofcorrectspellingfromthe

therhand,thestudentsthemlvesaresuppodtobeawarethatcorrect

spellingisamustinEnglishstudy.

Tosumup,correctspellingissoimportantthatbothstudentsandtheteachersshouldsparenoeffortstoachievecorrect

spelling.

ngaConrvation-OrientedCampus

【精彩范?】

Inthisageofrapiddepletionofnaturalresources，itisofparamountimportancetocreateaconrvation-orientedcampus.

Thecreationofsuchanecologically-friendlycampuswouldsignificantlycontributetoChina’soveralleffortstobecomea

leadinglow-carbonnationintheworld.

Themostcompellingreasonforsuchanendeavoristochangeadeep-entrenchedmisconceptionprevalentamongcollege

iversitiesprovidewaterandelectricityforfree，misleadingstudentsintobelievingthatsuchresourcesare

ldrealizethat，currently，manypartsofourcountryaresufferingfromunprecedented

ldshowdueconcernforthewelfareofpeopleinthoplacesbyrefusingtobelfish

onsiblecitizensofoursociety，wehavetheresponsibilitytorecyclewhateverwecan

lleffortsbyasingleindividualmaymakeahugedifference.

egraduatesarethefutureofourcountryand

byenhancingtheirconrvationawarenesstheywoulddefinitelyplayaleadingroleinprotectingourenvironmentinthe

futureandinmakingourworldabetterplacetolive.

23.―E-bookorPaperBook‖

1.有?喜歡閱讀電?書;

2.有?依舊喜歡紙質圖書;

3.談談你的看法。

參考作?

Somenarycomputerore-bookreader

readthemwheneverandwhereverheis,withoutaheavyload.

m,turningthepaperpagesandreadingthe

heirreasonsisthatE-booksmaketheireyesgotiredeasily.

IfIweregiventhechoice,Iwouldverylikelychooe-books,becauthecomputersoftwareissoadvancednowthatmore

workcouldbedonewhilereading,unctions

couldnotbefulfilledsoefficientlywithpaperandpens.

onheavytrafficinbigcities

1.現今，許多?城市的?們都在抱怨交通擁堵

2.為了解決這個問題，?們提出了?些建議

3.我的觀點

Nowadays,eriouslyinfluencedpeople'sdailylife

etheproblem,oplesuggestthatmore

way,thetrafficdensitycanbereducedhencespeedinguptheflowofbusand

newroadsandstreetswillbefilledwithmanycarsandbussoon.

heotherhand,thiswill

affecttheconsumptionandmakebusmorecrowded.

Inmyopinion,hesametime,busshouldhavetheirown

s,undergroundtrainandcitytrainshouldbedeveloped

quickly.(151words)