雅思英語作文better parents女性比起男性是更好的父母,女性在撫養(yǎng)孩

2024年3月9日發(fā)(作者：成長路上的陽光)

Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that

is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others

claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Who can be the

better parent ？Men or Women？

Model Answer 1: (Neutral Argument)

Parental responsibilities and roles are very important for the parents to make

their children prepared for the future. The way a father or mother treats a child

affects greatly for his/her future growth both mentally and physically. If parents

fail to take great care of their children, then tho children might go astray and

will claim their parents for their misfortune. Every mother and father love his or

her children more than anything in this world and they expect them to be great

persons and well established in future. Throughout the human history, mothers

mainly take care of the children and do most of the works for the children. On the

contrary, men are mainly busy outside the home to earn the living for the whole

family.

This is not to say that men are not of importance in children caring and they

do not know their kids. They are most necessary if children are to appreciate fully

the roles of both xes. But women have proven themlves superior parents as a

result of their condition, their less aggressive natures and they are generally

better to communicate with kids. Men remain busy at their works and have to

stay outside the home most of the time, but women have lots of spare times to

share with their children. From the time they are little girls, females learn about

nurturing. First with dolls and later perhaps with younger brothers and sisters;

girls are given the role of career. Girls e their mothers in the same roles and so

it is natural that they identify this as a female activity. Boys, in contrast, learn

competitive roles far removed from what it means to nurture. While boys may

dream of adventures, girls' conditioning means they tend to e the future in

terms of raising families. Girls also appear to be less aggressive than boys. In

adulthood, it is men, not women, who prove to be the aggressors in crime and in

war. Obviously, in raising children, a more patient, gentle manner is preferable

than a more aggressive one. Although there certainly exists gentlemen and

aggressive women, by and large, females are less likely to resort to violence in

attempting to solve problems.

But if we consider that all women are good for their children and men can

not rai a kid properly then perhaps it would be a partial judgment. Is not there

any family where the mother has died or not prent and it is the father who

takes care of the children as well as does jobs outside? Certainly, there are lots. In

third world countries, fathers are comparatively more educated than the mothers

and the take care of their children's education greatly. A child needs the affection

and caring of both father and mother.

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