七年級(jí)下冊(cè)Unit 9 What does he look like?寫作教學(xué)案
（教師使用）
【話題】外貌 (Physical appearance)
【寫作目標(biāo)】能夠用簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言描述人物的外貌、性格特征等。
【課前任務(wù)】
一、寫出下列短語(yǔ)。
1、長(zhǎng)發(fā) 2、一點(diǎn);少量
3、去看電影 4、戴眼鏡
5、小嘴巴 6、一張圓臉
7、畫某人的相 8、最后
參考答案：1.long hair 2. a little 3. go to the movie 4. wear glass 5. a small mouth 6. a round face 7. draw a picture of sb. 8. in the end
二、根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)意思完成下列句子。
1、你的朋友長(zhǎng)什么樣？
What does your friend __________ __________?
2、大衛(wèi)是高還是矮？
Is David __________ __________ __________?
3、很多年輕人喜歡穿牛仔褲。
Many young men like to __________ __________ ?
4、他留著棕色的短卷發(fā)。
He has __________ __________ __________ hair.
5、他真的很英俊。
He is __________ __________ .
參考答案：1. look like 2.tall or short 3.wear jeans 4. short curly brown 5. really handsome
三、寫出與本話題有關(guān)的詞匯和句型。
常用詞匯：
have … hair, tall, short, thin, heavy, a little, no, ear, be of medium height/build
經(jīng)典句型：
1、What does/do sb. look like?
2、Sb. be of medium height/build.
3、Sb. have/has … hair.
4、Is he thin or heavy?
5、Sb. looks young/pretty…
6、Sb. be friendly/shy/kind…
【課中任務(wù)】讀寫結(jié)合
一、A. 信息歸納
閱讀下面短文，然后按照項(xiàng)目要求填寫所缺信息。
Mrs. Wilson is not tall. She has curly hair. She comes from Australia. She is our math teacher. But I don’t like math. It’s too difficult and boring. Mrs. Wilson is 25 years old. She is very shy and a little rious(嚴(yán)肅的). She never plays games with us. She often goes to the movie on weekends. And she enjoys reading very much. She has lots of books in her bedroom.
Information Card
Name | 1. _________________ |
Age | 25 (years old) |
Nationality(國(guó)籍) | 2. _________________ |
Likes | Going to the movie and 3. _________________ |
Job（工作） | 4. _________________ |
Appearance（外貌） | Not tall and has5. _________________ |
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參考答案：1. Mrs. Wilson 2. Australia 3. reading 4. Math teacher 5. curly hair
B．賞析
找出上面材料中的好詞好句。
Uful words: tall, difficult, shy
Uful phras: curly hair, come from, a little rious, lots of
Uful ntences: She has curly hair.
She is very shy and a little rious.
She often goes to the movie on weekends.
二、書面表達(dá)
請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容介紹一下你的朋友。要求用上所提供的信息，句子通順，語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確。詞數(shù)：80詞左右。
Name:Li Feng Age:15 Likes: football, swimming, drawing, music Favorite star: Jackie Chan Favorite food: noodles Appearance: short curly hair, big eyes, medium height |
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1、寫作引導(dǎo)：
A. 重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ) 寫出下列短語(yǔ)。
1、中等身高 2、留著短的卷發(fā)
3、踢足球 4、最喜愛的明星
5、幫助別人
參考答案：1. be of medium height 2. have short curly hair 3. play football 4. favorite star 5. help others
B. 重點(diǎn)句型 根據(jù)漢語(yǔ)意思完成下列句子。
1、Tom 中等身材。
Tom is __________ __________ __________.
2、我妹妹有兩個(gè)大眼睛。
My sister has two __________ __________.
3、我最喜愛的水果是蘋果。
My __________ __________ is apples.
4、肖明想成為像羅納爾多一樣的足球運(yùn)動(dòng)員。
Xiao Ming __________ __________ __________ a football player like Ronaldo.
5、她總是面帶微笑幫助別人。
She always helps others __________ __________ __________.
參考答案：1. of medium build 2. big eyes 3. favorite fruit 4. wants to be 5.with a smile
C. 寫作技能指導(dǎo)
本單元主要學(xué)習(xí)了如何描述人物的外貌特征。在寫作時(shí)，要掌握詢問人物外貌特征的關(guān)鍵句型， 而且還應(yīng)熟記描述時(shí)使用的形容詞、固定短語(yǔ)及多個(gè)形容詞的排列順序。要寫好此類文章，要特別記住以下幾點(diǎn)：
1. 描述人物外貌特征的形容詞， 如：short, long, tall, straight等。
2. 常用結(jié)構(gòu)：主語(yǔ)+be+形容詞；主語(yǔ)+have/has+形容詞+名詞。
3. 描述人物的外貌時(shí)應(yīng)有清晰的層次，可以描述人物的長(zhǎng)相、衣著、性格等。
4. 除描述外貌之外，還可以適當(dāng)描述人物的愛好、愿望等。
在結(jié)束文章時(shí)，還應(yīng)給出你對(duì)所描述人物的評(píng)價(jià)。總之，在寫作過程中，應(yīng)緊扣文章的要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮、擴(kuò)展，增加文章的可讀性。
D. 寫作思路點(diǎn)撥
Ⅰ、開門見山，交代要描述的人的身份→ I have a good friend. His name is Li Feng.
Ⅱ、詳細(xì)描述朋友的外貌、愛好、愿望等→1. He’s of medium height …
2. He likes playing football …
3. His favorite food is noodles.
4. He wants to be …
Ⅲ、總結(jié)（我眼中的……）→I think he is very nice becau …
2、實(shí)踐寫作（含小組討論、改評(píng)修正、賞析作品）
【我的草稿】
【我的作品】
【我的訂正】
3、參考范文
I have a good friend. His name is Li Feng. He is 15 years old. He’s of medium height. He has short curly hair. He also has two big eyes. He likes playing football, swimming and drawing. He likes music, too. His favorite food is noodles. His favorite star is Jackie Chan. And he wants to be a football player like Ronaldo. I think he is very nice becau he always helps others with a smile.
點(diǎn)評(píng)：1、文章開門見山地介紹了要描述的人物。
2、在描述人物的過程中，運(yùn)用平實(shí)的語(yǔ)言，詳細(xì)地介紹了朋友的年齡、外貌、愛好、飲食，并能簡(jiǎn)單介紹朋友的愿望，反應(yīng)出作者對(duì)朋友的細(xì)致了解。語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，句子通順。
3、結(jié)尾時(shí)，發(fā)表了自己對(duì)朋友的評(píng)價(jià)。句子“…h(huán)e always helps others with a smile.”反應(yīng)了作者對(duì)朋友的細(xì)微觀察。
