老師作文之英語作文李華對老師的意見和建議

2023年12月28日發(作者：思前想后的意思)

老師作文之英語作文李華對老師的意見和建議

英語作文李華對老師的意見和建議

【篇一：中考英語提建議類作文】

1. 詢問學習外語的建議

假設你叫李華，你的英國筆友linda為了來中國參觀而報名參加了漢語培訓班學習漢語。她最近寫信向你詢問學習外語的建議。請根據下列提示和你學習英語的體會給linda寫一封回信。

注意：1．回信需要包括全部要點； 2．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數； 3．字數80左右。

參考范文：dear linda，

im very glad that youll come to china . i know it isnt easy to

learn a foreign language, but i have some ideas that may help.

firstly, its very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class

and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later.

condly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in

and out of class. dont be afraid of making mistakes. then try to

listen and read more in chine. whats more, youd better plan

your time well and study it regularly every day.

above all, you should be confident in yourlf and dont give

up whenever you meet with difficulty. im sure you will succeed

through your hard work.

best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in china.

yours,

li hua

2. 對考試作弊現象的建議

目前，學生考試作弊現象嚴重，請圍繞以下要點談談其中原因以及個人建議。

原因：1.考試太濫 2.自身勤奮不夠 3.把大量時間用在上網和玩游戲上 4.為了騙取家長和老師高興

看法與建議：1、作弊有害；2、要做人誠實，學習發奮；3、學校應減少考試。

要求：1、字數80-100；2、圍繞要點可適當發揮；3、文章開頭已給出，不計入總字數。參考范文：at prent, a number of middle

school students have picked up a bad habit - cheating in

examinations.

there are three main reasons. first, schools have given

students too many exams, some of which are too difficult. cond,

some students are not hard-working and they dont work hard at

their lessons. third, they waste a lot of time playing games or

surfing the internet. so they havent enough time to prepare for

the exams. finally, students have to do so

to make their teachers and parents happy.

in my opinion, cheating in exams does great harm to our

study. we students should be honest and diligent, and only in this

way can we improve our study and make progress. besides, our

teachers should offer us fewer exams and more time to study for

ourlves.

3. 對學習提出建議

假如你叫zhang fang，是美國中學生lucy的筆友，你收到了她的電子郵件。在郵件中她表達了不喜歡英語和歷史科目，因為要記的

東西太多又乏味，上課經常想睡覺，考試也考不好，期末考試就要

來了，不知道該怎么辦。針對她的困惑，談談你的看法，同時提出

一些建議，并表達對她的祝愿。

dear lucy，

i?m very happy to hear from you. don?t worry too much.

many students have the same problem

like you. i think it?s very common for students to dislike

memorizing. here?s my advice. but in fact english and history are

not as boring as you think. if you try the following things，you

may find they are interesting and you will not feel sleepy in class

again.

first you had better learn the new lessons by yourlf and

write down the difficult points before lessons. it can make you

become interested in what the teachers say in class. cond you

should listen carefully and try to answer the teachers? questions.

it can help you understand better and memorize more quickly.

what?s more， you also need to review the lessons regularly after

class. if you still feel unhappy， you can have a talk with your

teacher to ask for help. i really hope my advice can help you out

and get ?a? in english and history exams. keep trying， i believe

you will enjoy the school life and make great progress with your

study.

yours，

zhang fang

4. 對生活提出建議

假如你是韓梅，你的筆友alice 給你發來的e-mail，郵件中告訴你，最近媽媽總是對她說過馬路要小心，要多穿衣服，在學校表現得好

不好，這些都讓她很苦惱。給她寫一封回信。與她交流看法，并幫

她排憂解難。

提示詞語：listen to， mother?s love， care about，communicate with， get along with， smile dear alice，

as a teenager， i met the same problem as you. but now i

can get on/ along better with my mother. here are some ideas for

you.

your mother talks much， becau she cares about you. i?m

sure your mum loves you very much. maybe it shows your

mother?s love. so i think you should listen to her. if your opinions

are different from your mother?s， you can communicate with

her， and tell her what you?re thinking about. if your mother

doesn?t take your advice， just keep

silent and give her a smile.

i hope what i say here can help you a lot.

han mei

5. 對怎樣緩解學習壓力放松自己提出建議

中考即將來臨，學生們學習時間長、壓力大，專家建議學生每天課

后應采取適當的方式放松自己。為此，不同的同學有不同的放松方式，有的愛看電視，有的聽音樂，有的做運動…請你談談你通過哪

些方式放松自己并說說原因，談談你的感受。

提示詞語：relax， tv， music， think

the nior high school entrance examination is coming. in

order to make a success in the exam i think it?s high time for

us to relax a little. or we?ll be too nervous to work well in the

order to relax ourlves， we can turn to some of our

hobbies， different students have different ways --- some

watch tv，some listen to music… but for me i enjoy taking

exerci most. whenever i feel tired， i always spend an hour （in）

walking or jogging in the park. besides， i also play

table tennis with my friends after class. in my opinion，

taking exerci can not only rest our brains and eyes but also help

build our bodies. i think it?s really helpful to both my health

and my study. i hope all of my classmates can join me in

getting relaxed. i wish you all every success in the coming

examination！

6. 對不愛鍛煉的同學提出建議

假如你叫李飛，是學校“校園英語報”的編輯。你收到你同學張麗的姐姐的來信。姐姐在信中說張麗在業余時間看電視看書，不喜歡鍛煉，希望你能寫信給張麗告訴她鍛煉的重要性并提一些建議。請根

據這位姐姐的要求，給張麗寫一封回信。

dear zhang li，

your sister is worried about you very much. becau you

don?t take any exerci in spare time. i think health is very

important to us teenagers. either study or work is bad on

strong body. doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and

energetic. if we don?t take any exerci， we may feel tired and

get sick easily. so you should go out instead of staying at home.

there are many kinds of sports you can do， such as running，swimming and ball games. just remember “exerci one hour a

day，keep illness away.”

good luck！

yours，

li fei

【篇二：英語作文建議信】

建議信（一）

假定你是李華, 你的朋友張柯發e-mail給你, 就買什么樣的英語詞典想聽聽你的建議。請根據下列提示, 用英語給他回一封120個詞左右的e-mail, 推薦他買電子詞典。

1. 方便、快捷;

2. 內置多部詞典、能發音;

3. 能儲存資料;

4. 其他……

建議信（二）

假設你是李華, 請根據以下要點寫一封信, 勸說全校同學過低碳生活(live a low-carbon life)。

1. 陳述理由: 為什么要過低碳生活? (環境質量日益惡化等)

2. 如何過低碳生活? 提出至少三條建議。(必要時才開燈; 讓電器按節能方式運轉; 騎自行車; 限制塑料袋使用; 垃圾分類等)

【篇三：英語老師最喜歡的八類英語作文句型】

閱卷老師最喜歡的八類英語作文句型

積累一些段落句型，擺脫平鋪直敘，對英語寫作可以起到事半功倍的效果。關鍵是要有意識的把這些句型用到作文中去哦~，并且同學們需要記住這條真理：practice makes perfect.（熟能生巧）

一.開頭句型

far as ...is/am/are concerned 就……而言例如：就我而言 as

far as i am concerned

can be said with 可以肯定地說......

the proverb says，... 正如諺語所說的，......

has to be 必須注意到......

generally 普遍認為......

likely that ... 這可能是因為......

這是很難的......

no denying the 毫無疑問，無可否認......

g is more important than the 沒有什么比......更重要。

far more important 更重要的是…...

二.銜接句型

1.a ca in point is ... 一個典型的例子是......

the problem is not so simple. therefore，... 然而問題并非如此簡單，所以……

its a 但遺憾的是…...

spite of the 盡管......

r, we hold the 此外，我們堅持認為，......

6..however , the difficulty 然而，困難在于…...

，我們要注意......

it has been 正如上面所提到的…

this respect,... 從這個角度上,......

r, 然而, ...…

三.結尾句型

1.i will conclude 最后我要說…...

ore, we have the reason to 因此，我們有理由相信…...

things considered= in a word=in conclusion 總而言之

may be safely 它可以有把握地說......

ore, in my opinion,... 因此，在我看來，......

what has been discusd above, we may safely draw

the 通過以上討論，我們可以得出結論...…

data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…

通過數據我們得到的結論是，....

can be concluded from the 從討論中我們可以得出......的結論

my point of view, it would be 在我看來，如果……也許更好

四.舉例句型

is one more example.這里有不止一個例子.

… for example. 就拿……為例子

五.常用于引言段的句型

people think that… 有些人認為…...

be frank, i can not agree with their opinion for the

reasons below. 坦率地說，我不能同意他們的意見，理由如下。

3. i believe the statement is valid becau… 我認為這個論點是正確的，因為…...

4. i cannot entirely agree with the 我無法完全同意….這一觀點的說法.

5. along with the development of…, more 隨著……的發展，越來越多的...…

is commonly/generally/widely/ believed

/held/accepted/recognized that… 通常認為…...

7. as far as i am concerned, i completely agree with the

former/ the latter. 就我而言，我完全同意前者/后者的觀點。

六表示比較和對比的常用句型

1. a is completely different from b. a和b完全不同。

2 the difference between a and b is/ a和b不同的地方是......

七演繹法常用的句型

1. there are veral reasons for…, but in general, they come

down to three major ones. 對于......有幾個原因，但一般，可以歸結為三個主要原因。

2. many ways can contribute to solving this problem, but the

following ones may be most effective.有很多方法可以解決這個問題，但下面的可能是最有效的。

3. generally, the advantages can be listed as follows.一般來說，這些優勢可以列舉如下。

reasons are as follows. 理由如下。

八因果推理法常用句型

e/since we read the book, we have learned a lot. 由于

閱讀這本書，我們已經學到了很多。

2. we read the book; as a result / therefore / thus / hence /

conquently / for this reason / becau of this, weve learned a

lot. 由于閱讀這本書，我們已經學到了很多。

3. as a result of /becau of/due to/owing to reading the

book, weve learned a lot. 由于閱讀這本書，我們已經學到了很多。

滿分作文詞組奉送

1.經濟的快速發展 the rapid development of economy

2.人民生活水平的顯著提高/ 穩步增長the remarkable

improvement/ steady growth of people’s living standard

3.先進的科學技術 advanced science and technology

4.面臨新的機遇和挑戰 be faced with new opportunities and

challenges

5.人們普遍認為it is commonly believed/ recognized that…

6.社會發展的必然結果 the inevitable result of social

development

7.引起了廣泛的公眾關注 arou wide public concern/ draw

public attention

8.不可否認it is undeniable that…/ there is no denying that…

9.熱烈的討論/ 爭論 a heated discussion/ debate

10. 有爭議性的問題 a controversial issue

11.完全不同的觀點 a totally different argument

12.一些人…而另外一些人… some people… while others…

13. 就我而言/ 就個人而言 as far as i am concerned, / personally,

14.就…達到絕對的一致reach an absolute connsus on…

15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons

16.雙方的論點 argument on both sides

17.發揮著日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role

in…

18.對…必不可少be indispensable to …

19.正如諺語所說 as the proverb goes:

20.…也不例外…be no exception

21.對…產生有利/不利的影響 exert positive/ negative effects

on…

22.利遠遠大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the

disadvantages。

23.導致，引起 lead to/ give ri to/ contribute to/ result in

24.復雜的社會現象 a complicated social phenomenon

25.責任感 / 成就感 n of responsibility/ n of

achievement

26. 競爭與合作精神 n of competition and cooperation

27. 開闊眼界widen one’s horizon/ broaden one’s vision

28.學習知識和技能 acquire knowledge and skills

29.經濟/心理負擔 financial burden / psychological burden

30.考慮到諸多因素 take many factors into account/

consideration

31. 從另一個角度 from another perspective

32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts

33. 對…有益be beneficial / conducive to…

34.為社會做貢獻 make contributions to the society

35.打下堅實的基礎lay a solid foundation for…

36.綜合素質 comprehensive quality

37.無可非議 blameless / beyond reproach

39.致力于/ 投身于be committed / devoted to…

40. 應當承認 admittedly,

41.不可推卸的義務 unshakable duty

42. 滿足需求satisfy/ meet the needs of…

43.可靠的信息源 a reliable source of information

44.寶貴的自然資源 valuable natural resources

45.因特網 the internet (一定要有冠詞，字母i 大寫)

46.方便快捷 convenient and efficient

47.在人類生活的方方面面 in all aspects of human life

48.環保(的) environmental protection / environmentally

friendly

49.社會進步的體現 a symbol of society progress

50.科技的飛速更新 the ever-accelerated updating of science

and technology

51.對這一問題持有不同態度 hold different attitudes towards

this issue

52.支持前/后種觀點的人 people / tho in favor of the former/

latter opinion

53.有/ 提供如下理由/ 證據 have/ provide the following

reasons/ evidence

54.在一定程度上 to some extent/ degree / in some way

55. 理論和實踐相結合 integrate theory with practice

56. …必然趨勢an irresistible trend of…

57.日益激烈的社會競爭 the increasingly fierce social

competition

58.眼前利益 immediate interest/ short-term interest

59.長遠利益. interest in the long run

60.…有其自身的優缺點… has its me rits and demerits/

advantages and disadvantages

61.揚長避短exploit to the full one’s favorable conditions

and avoid unfavorable ones

62.取其精髓，取其糟粕 take the esnce and discard the dregs。

63.對…有害 do harm to / be harmful to/ be detrimental to

64.交流思想/ 情感/ 信息 exchange ideas/ emotions/

information

65.跟上…的最新發展 keep pace with / catch up with/ keep

abreast with the latest development of …

66.采取有效措施來… take effective measures to do sth

67.…的健康發展the healthy development of …

68.有利有弊 every coin has its two sides./no garden without

weeds.

69.對…觀點因人而異views on …vary from person to person.

70.重視attach great importance to…

71.社會地位 social status

72.把時間和精力放在…上focus time and energy on…

73.擴大知識面expand one’s scope of knowledge

74.身心兩方面 both physically and mentally

75.有直接/間接關系be directly / indirectly related to…

76. 提出折中提議 t forth a compromi proposal

77. 可以取代“think”的詞 believe, claim, maintain, argue,

insist, hold the opinion/ belief that

78.緩解壓力/ 減輕負擔 relieve stress/ burden

79.優先考慮/發展… give (top) priority to sth.

80.與…比較compared with…/ in comparison with

81. 相反 in contrast / on the contrary.

82.代替 replace/ substitute / take the place of

83.經不起推敲 cannot bear clor analysis / cannot hold water

84.提供就業機會 offer job opportunities

85. 社會進步的反映 mirror of social progress

86.毫無疑問undoubtedly, / there is no doubt that…

87.增進相互了解 enhance/ promote mutual understanding

88.充分利用 make full u of / take advantage of

89．承受更大的工作壓力 suffer from heavier work pressure

90．保障社會的穩定和繁榮 guarantee the stability and

prosperity of our society

91．更多地強調put more emphasis on…

92．適應社會發展 adapt onelf to the development of

society 93．實現夢想realize one’s dream/ make one’s dream

come true

94. 主要理由列舉如下 the main reasons are listed as follows:

95. 首先 first， firstly， in the first place, to begin with

96．其次 cond, condly, in the cond place

97. 再次 besidesin addition, additionally, moreover,

furthermore

98. 最后 finally, last but not the least, above all, lastly,

99. 總而言之 all in all, to sum up, in summary, in a word,

100．我們還有很長的路要走 we still have a long way to go.

實戰演練假定你是李華，你的英國朋友peter來信向你咨詢如何才能學好中文。請你根據要點寫封回信。要點：1. 參加中文學習班 2.

看中文書刊、電視 3. 學唱中文歌曲 4. 交中國朋友

注意：1. 詞數100左右 2. 可適當增加細節 3.開頭語已為你寫好【寫作指導】信件類型：建議信內容：寫信人就某事或某問題提出建議主體時態：一般現在時

正文部分：必須給對方問題明確答復；建議的內容要層次清楚，目的明確，具有合理性和說服力；語言要正確、清晰、禮貌、體貼，

易于對方接受。

【范文】

dear peter,

i’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how

to learn chine well.

i have following suggestions. first, it is important to take a

chine cours e, as you’ll be able to learn from the teacher and

practice with your fellow students. what’s more, it also helps to

watch tv and read books, newspapers and magazines in chine

whenever possible. the last but not the least, it would be more

beneficial if you could learn and sing chine songs, becau by

doing so you’ll learn and remember chine words more easily.

you can also make more chine friends，who will tell you a lot

about china and help you learn with efforts can you

learn it well. i believe you can make it .try and write me in chine

next time.

best wishes,

li hua