新高考英語讀后續寫同情憐憫讀后續寫語料積累

2024年2月12日發(作者：小學優秀作文)

讀后續寫語料積累練習（七）：同情憐憫

一、描寫痛苦憂傷的常見表達

1. 同情；憐憫_______________________ 2. 同情（心） ________________

3. 同情......___________________ ___________________________

4. 表示慰問____________________________ 5. 接受慰問_______________________________

6. 出于同情___________________________

拓展：

①sympathy n.→ sympathetic adj. 同情的

e.g. Her eyes brimmed over with sympathetic tears. 她的眼睛充滿了同情的淚水。

Sympathetic tears bedewed my cheeks. 同情的淚水濕潤了我的雙頰。

We are sympathetic with the flood sufferers. 我們同情水災受難者。

He is a sympathetic/ compassionate person. 他是一個有同情心的人。

②compassion n. →compassionate adj. 富有同情心的

e.g. Helping her was really compassionate thing to do. 你能為她提供幫助，真有同情心。

I can’t stay mad at you for being the kind, compassionate woman you are.

我沒辦法對你生氣，因為你是一個那么和善，富有愛心的女人。

7. 她同情地緊緊握住我的手。

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8. 我心中涌起一陣強烈的同情。

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9. 他痛苦的眼神似乎是在祈求我饒了他。

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10. 出于憐憫，他把她帶回到了自己的住所。

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11. 富蘭克林默默地站著，悲痛和憐憫扯著他的心，他掂量著該談些什么。

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二、審題訓練

Adventure with Cuckoo

Not far from our hou in Texas was thick woodland. There I spent much of my time. I was an

animal-lover, eager to watch－and capture, if possible－ the interesting creatures that lived there.

Walking one afternoon in the depths of the woodland, I came upon a hug hollow log (空的原木）, I look curiously into it, and to my excitement, there was the figure of a cuckoo(杜鵑鳥). It was

probably a mother bird sitting on her eggs. Eagerly I dragged two large stones to one end of the log

and clod the opening there.

If I wanted the bird, I would have to go get her. The log was almost twenty feet long. Could I

get through it? Would the cuckoo peck(啄) at me?

In spite of my fears, I started in. I inched forward with my arms stretched out in front of me and

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my toes digging into the earth. My face was presd against the wet wood. I could not bring my arms

back, becau there was not enough room.

Suddenly I realized that the cuckoo and I were not the only things in the hollow log. I trembled.

What was this soft thing my hand felt? It was the nest of white-footed mice! The bright-eyed little

creatures bounced for the darkest place they could find in a panic. They raced over my back, under

my shirt, about my neck. One of them crawled between my body and the wood! I gave a wild shrug.

Many other creatures, like incts were on the run for a safe place. Poor harmless little creatures!

How guilty I was to have disturbed their life.

Suddenly I saw the mother cuckoo stood up, hisd(斯叫), and coughed. I wished that I hadn’t

covered up the other end of the log. I drove off the great bird. She hisd forward painfully.

I was face to face with a lovely newborn baby cuckoo. It was downy white, with gray legs and

naked head. Breathing quietly, it rested in the nest.

Paragraph 1:

I wormed my way ahead carefully with the baby bird in my hand.

Paragraph 2：

I had planned to take the mother and the baby cuckoo home.

I wormed my way ahead carefully with the baby bird in my hand.

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Character: ___________________________________________________

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Main plot:

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I had planned to take the mother and the baby cuckoo home.

Setting(when & where):______________________________________

Character:_________________________________________________

Event 1:_______________________________________________________

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I wormed my way ahead carefully with the baby bird in my hand.

I had planned to take the mother and the baby cuckoo home.

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用上所默單詞&短語&句子以及提示，拓展句子。

Para.1 I wormed my way ahead carefully with the baby bird in my hand.

Event 1: At the end of the log, I grabbed the parent bird by the feet.

Feeling: nervous but plead

Tips: 動作鏈 (lower, stretch, grab; try非謂語)

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Event 2: I pushed the stones away and worn out.

Feeling: painful, relieved and excited

Tips：動作鏈（tremble; climb out）+環境描寫（from the log to an open area; from dark to bright）

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Event 3: I look at the mother and baby who showed greater panic and uneasiness.

Feeling: sympathy; sorrow; compassion

Tips: (be ized with; tear by; weight)

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Para.2：I had planned to take the mother and the baby cuckoo home.

Event 1: I couldn’t bear to take one of them.

Feeling: sympathy

Tips: (well up)

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Event 2: I put them back in the hollow log.

Feeling: sympathy

Tips: (out of)

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Event 3: I sorted mylf out, prepared to head home and tell the whole story to my mother.

Feeling: proud

Tips: 動作鏈(flick dust off; smooth hair)+升華主題(appreciate tone; compassionate; inparable)

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讀后續寫語料積累練習（七）：同情憐憫 參考答案

I wormed my way ahead carefully with the baby bird in my hand.

Setting(when & where): in the log, dark

Character: I, mother bird, baby bird

Event 1: At the end of the log, I grabbed the parent bird by the feet.

Feeling: nervous but plead

Main plot:

Event 2: I pushed the stones away and worn out.

Feeling: painful, relieved and excited

Caught birds

Event 3: I look at the mother and baby who showed greater panic and

in the log

uneasiness.

Feeling: sympathy; sorrow; compassion

I had planned to take the mother and the baby cuckoo home.

Setting(when & where): out of the log, bright

Character: I, mother bird, baby bird, my mother

Event 1: I couldn’t bear to take one of them.

Feeling: sympathy

Main plot:

Event 2: I put them back in the hollow log.

Put birds

Feeling: sympathy but relief

Event 3: I sorted mylf out, prepared to head home and tell the whole story

back and

to my mother.

headed home

Feeling: proud

Theme: Mother is inparable from children

Para. 1: I wormed my way ahead carefully with the baby bird in my hand.

Event 1: At the end of the log, I grabbed the parent bird by the feet.

Feeling: nervous but plead

Tips: 動作鏈 （lower, stretch, grab; try非謂語 ）

The parent bird drew back. At the end of the log, I held my breath, lowered my head and slowly

stretched out my right foot as far as I can, trying to grab her carefully. How plead I was to catch

bird in the log.

Event 2: I pushed the stones away and worn out.

Feeling: painful, relieved and excited

Tips：動作鏈（tremble; climb out）+環境描寫（from the log to an open area; from dark to bright）

I push the stones away and climbed out with great pains, standing up trembly under the bright sun.

The sunshine cast beautiful shadows among the leaves which were waving in the breeze. Breathing

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fresh air in deep gasps, I felt relieved and excited.

Event 3: I look at the mother and baby who showed greater panic and uneasiness.

Feeling: sympathy; sorrow; compassion

Tips: (be ized with; tear by; weight)

In the bright light, however, mother and baby showed greater panic and uneasiness. Suddenly I was

ized with sympathy, torn by sorrow and compassion, and weighted what to do.

Para. 2: I had planned to take the mother and the baby cuckoo home.

Event 1: I couldn’t bear to take one of them.

Feeling: sympathy

Tips: (well up)

However, I couldn’t bring mylf to take the baby away or leave it there an orphan. The baby’s

painful eyes emed to beg me to spare her. A strong flood of sympathy welled up in my mind again.

Event 2: I put them back in the hollow log.

Feeling: sympathy but relief

Tips：（out of )

Out of sympathy, I decided to put the baby back in the hollow long and put the mother beside it.

Event 3: I sorted mylf out, prepared to head home and tell the whole story to my mother.

Feeling: proud

Tips: （compassionate）

I flicked the dust off my clothes and smoothed back my hair and then headed home. Hearing my

whole story, my mother said in an appreciative tone, “ you are a compassionate child and I am proud

of what you have done, my son. Mother is inparable from children!”

參考答案

I wormed my way ahead carefully with the baby bird in my hand. The parent bird drew back.

At the end of the log, I held my breath, lowered my head and slowly stretched out my right foot as

far as I could, trying to grab her carefully. How plead I was to catch bird in the log. I push the

stones away and climbed out with great pains, standing up trembly under the bright sun. The

sunshine cast beautiful shadows among the leaves which were waving in the breeze. Breathing fresh

air in deep gasps, I felt relieved and excited. However, in my hand, the mother and baby showed

greater panic and uneasiness. Suddenly I was ized with sympathy, torn by sorrow and compassion,

and weighted what to do.

I had planned to take the mother and the baby cuckoo home. However, I couldn’t bring

mylf to take the baby away or leave it there an orphan. The baby’s painful eyes emed to beg me

to spare her. A strong flood of sympathy welled up in my mind again. Out of sympathy, I decided to

put the baby back in the hollow log and put the mother beside it. I flicked the dust off my clothes and

smoothed back my hair and then headed home. Hearing my whole story, my mother said in an

appreciative tone, “ you are a compassionate child and I am proud of what you have done, my son.

Mother is inparable from children!”

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