20-21版:Writing—An essay about a story(步步高)

2023年12月24日發(作者：歸納總結)

Writing—An essay about a story

寫作指導

本單元的寫作任務是根據本單元的故事寫一篇短評。寫作時需要注意以下幾點：

1．簡要介紹故事發生的時間、地點、人物；事件發生的起因、經過、結果；

2．對故事中的人物進行評論；

3．最后闡述你對這個故事的感受并解釋你的感受。

常用表達

1．Once upon a time，there was a．..

2．Unfortunately，they were stuck

3．They were very brave in

4．They never gave

5．Later，they managed

6．From this story，we

7．All of us were moved by the

8．We should learn something from

請根據下面的提示寫一篇短評。詞數80左右。

1．歐內斯特·沙克爾頓和他的船員們一起登上了名字為“堅忍”號的大船。途中“堅忍”號被冰山困住了，大家棄船后逃到了大象島。沙克爾頓駕船去尋求幫助。最后，盡管困難重重船員們還是活了下來。

2．在這個故事里面船員之間真誠的關心和愛以及他們在困難面前的忍耐力和毅力也使我深受鼓舞。

3．從這個故事中我學到一個教訓：無論遇到任何困難，都不要放棄！

審題

寫作要求是根據本單元的故事寫一篇短評。寫作時應注意下面幾點：

1．確定文體：這是一篇短評，寫作中應注意短評的常規格式。

2．主體時態：文章應以一般過去時為主。

3．主體人稱：由于是寫一篇短評，所以人稱應該以第三人稱為主。

謀篇

第一段：介紹背景。

第二段：簡要介紹這個故事。

第三段：表達自己對這個故事的感受。

核心詞匯

1．上船 go aboard

2．在途中on the way

3．被……困住be/become stuck in

4．沉入sink into

5．放棄，拋棄abandon

6．逃跑escape

連詞成句

1．歐內斯特·沙克爾頓和他的船員們登上了名字為“堅忍”號的大船。(aboard；Endurance)

Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship who name was Endurance.

2．不幸的是，途中“堅忍”號被冰塊困住，沉進了大洋中。(unfortunately；be/become stuck

in；sink into)

Unfortunately，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice and sank into the ocean.

3．在放棄那艘船后，他們逃到了大象島上。(abandon；escape)

After they had abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island.

句式升級

1．用非謂語動詞改寫句1。

Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named Endurance.

2．用非謂語動詞改寫句2。

Unfortunately，on the way Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the ocean.

3．用非謂語動詞改寫句3。

Having abandoned the ship，they escaped to Elephant Island.

用適當的過渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯想內容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。

參考范文

This story is about a great expedition in history.

Ernest Shackleton and his crew went aboard the ship named unately，on the

way Endurance became stuck in the ice，sinking into the abandoned the ship，they

escaped to Elephant eton left them to find crew were able to survive in

spite of so many difficulties.

I was deeply moved by the concern and love between them and I’m also inspired by their

endurance and perverance in face of a word，I have learned an important lesson

from the inspiring is，whatever difficulties we meet，never give up.